You looked me in the eyeAnd said “I don’t do sci-fi”immediate movement !...it's now humanized and the rest tells of a tender request...nice takePeace, hpmy mind went elsewhere
those first two lines are strong and powerful/statement made...and then you go very gentle from there..good write libby
tight and right so very often.
Full of feeling and meaning...
Here here...the lego sets and bumff are all a parody of the original films...star trek lego for the ds? oh my...
Good piece, effective.
...obsession,man/child regression.i hear the snaps at a dark coffee house.clever write!lost in space...one of my favorites!
Loved this Libby. It flows so well and with every turn (of phrase) there's a surprise. I've said before with each poem of yours I read your voice is more distinctive and asserts it's own unique qualities!
"Shall I explain it again?"You had me feeling like a child being scorned."A man/child regression"And before long confirmed my feelings forewarned.Great writing!
I like the firm, steady, but quiet voice that comes clear in this one. The sincere and deeply felt request for understanding is only underlined by that voice. Elizabeth