A small poem with such a big story inside it? Like it! :)
would be nice to have a sat nav for life as well...wouldn't it..?i like this!
Tight poem with impact.
Oh so wonderful doubt about ourselves and others. Potent, so-much-between-the-lines work.
short & sweet poem. really enjoyed this :]
Love how you put so much into such a small space. Some poems get overburdened with their words. This is sly, simple, yet deep.
I could do with said satnav! Nice choice of few words bought a small smile to my face on a cold evening ;)
Sewed up that one in a neat package, and I enjoyed unwrapping it.
Very special and the view of you guys at the old moving picture show and then meandering home. You get clearer and better with every write. Gay @beachanny
If only our hearts were equipped with GPS, so we'd always know which way to go!Nice One Shot, Libby! :)
so true.....cheers pete
Dear LibbyBeautiful imagery and the question is powerful.. in such a short lines .. you have created a beautiful story...Thanks for sharing..ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
divine words.well put.
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Simple and haunting. I love poems that offer a mystery without giving too much of an answer. Some clues are good, but presenting a universe for the reader to think in is every poet's job.