tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post1768397991648127040..comments2023-08-12T06:56:31.879-07:00Comments on Libbypoetry: The Dark SideLibbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01984503821540060594noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-30764730747603637572011-02-21T15:59:54.760-08:002011-02-21T15:59:54.760-08:00I like the firm, steady, but quiet voice that come...I like the firm, steady, but quiet voice that comes clear in this one. The sincere and deeply felt request for understanding is only underlined by that voice. <br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-10766314664018952892011-02-21T14:30:35.831-08:002011-02-21T14:30:35.831-08:00"Shall I explain it again?"
You had me f..."Shall I explain it again?"<br />You had me feeling like a child being scorned.<br />"A man/child regression"<br />And before long confirmed my feelings forewarned.<br />Great writing!JackAZ Photographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08010316599877217312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-10083848049508575162011-02-20T09:34:20.536-08:002011-02-20T09:34:20.536-08:00Loved this Libby. It flows so well and with every ...Loved this Libby. It flows so well and with every turn (of phrase) there's a surprise. I've said before with each poem of yours I read your voice is more distinctive and asserts it's own unique qualities!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-24079549818696124812011-02-20T09:22:47.655-08:002011-02-20T09:22:47.655-08:00...obsession,man/child regression.i hear the snaps......obsession,man/child regression.i hear the snaps at a dark coffee house.clever write!lost in space...one of my favorites!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08660545422931632039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-26978974560954560922011-02-20T08:39:07.117-08:002011-02-20T08:39:07.117-08:00Good piece, effective.Good piece, effective.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-63092491056195914752011-02-20T07:11:23.641-08:002011-02-20T07:11:23.641-08:00Here here...the lego sets and bumff are all a paro...Here here...the lego sets and bumff are all a parody of the original films...star trek lego for the ds? oh my...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-40503562134282521292011-02-20T06:59:36.056-08:002011-02-20T06:59:36.056-08:00Full of feeling and meaning...Full of feeling and meaning...Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-86964945856343318912011-02-20T06:18:24.795-08:002011-02-20T06:18:24.795-08:00tight and right so very often.tight and right so very often.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-84892364112078800932011-02-20T06:04:49.281-08:002011-02-20T06:04:49.281-08:00those first two lines are strong and powerful/stat...those first two lines are strong and powerful/statement made...and then you go very gentle from there..good write libbyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-44251846971074838652011-02-20T05:57:50.971-08:002011-02-20T05:57:50.971-08:00You looked me in the eye
And said “I don’t do sci-...You looked me in the eye<br />And said “I don’t do sci-fi”<br /><br />immediate movement !...it's now humanized and the rest tells of a tender request...nice take<br /><br />Peace, hp<br /><br />my mind went elsewhereknot eyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14238403848734436106noreply@blogger.com