tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post3499425728481645113..comments2023-08-12T06:56:31.879-07:00Comments on Libbypoetry: The DreamLibbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01984503821540060594noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-71063051221561190202010-12-12T10:17:39.855-08:002010-12-12T10:17:39.855-08:00dynamic writing.
keep it up...
signed in to follo...dynamic writing.<br />keep it up...<br /><br />signed in to follow your blog, welcome visit and follow us back.<br /><br /> <a href="http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/there-are-lots-of-visions-in-me-4-potluck-week-13/" rel="nofollow">Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Sunday!</a><br /><br />hope to see you in tonight.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-80646283564061719282010-11-12T14:23:52.881-08:002010-11-12T14:23:52.881-08:00Hi All thanks for the lovely feedback, I appreciat...Hi All thanks for the lovely feedback, I appreciate it so much. Thank you for taking the time, Libby xLibbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01984503821540060594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-31171811356302807462010-11-11T23:16:04.112-08:002010-11-11T23:16:04.112-08:00"I feel you breathing on my shoulder
Imprison..."I feel you breathing on my shoulder<br />Imprisoning me once more <br />Haunting my reality."<br /><br />I feel this each time, every moment I think of past and dread to look back yet again!<br /><br /><br />Come along and join the challenge to think beyond...visit the link<br /><br />http://wizardmeetsvagabond.blogspot.com/2010/06/recall_11.html<br /><br />and share your own imagination triggered by the image...the comment section is waiting for you....<br /><br /> <br /><br />"Helping readers to think and increase their imagination power so that they can express their thoughts better"wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17586404593878583897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-43096996599934550902010-11-11T06:05:15.981-08:002010-11-11T06:05:15.981-08:00i kind of felt you were in one heck of a scary con...i kind of felt you were in one heck of a scary controlling relationship when i read the last stanza....a wonderful fluent write that lead to that last moment...cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-46501648462293016202010-11-11T03:04:03.187-08:002010-11-11T03:04:03.187-08:00Dear Libby
A great feel of life... I loved your w...Dear Libby<br /><br />A great feel of life... I loved your words.."I’m on a mission, floating above life<br />This is how freedom should feel."<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-58449895901441313052010-11-10T14:09:26.381-08:002010-11-10T14:09:26.381-08:00Libby, that is just incredible!! Your best, yet! T...Libby, that is just incredible!! Your best, yet! The rhythm and timing are incredible. I found I could do nothing but just let myself go and fall into your world. Beautiful!Robin Daltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09378495880569671179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-4118846552413421092010-11-10T14:02:44.170-08:002010-11-10T14:02:44.170-08:00This IS a poem and a good one. I like the locks un...This IS a poem and a good one. I like the locks unlocking to a place of freedom to rove the skies and byways before returning to an imprisoned state. You took us through the euphoria and anxiety such a trip entails. Excellent. Well done, you! Gay (Your work gets stronger each week)!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-80809906649461765702010-11-10T09:47:41.435-08:002010-11-10T09:47:41.435-08:00I liked the sudden JOLT back to the 'prison...I liked the sudden JOLT back to the 'prison' of reality, which emphasizes the freee, dream-like quality of the preceding stanzas.<br /><br />Nice One Shot, Libby!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-739396286464901372010-11-10T02:33:44.872-08:002010-11-10T02:33:44.872-08:00I like the floaty feel/language to this - light, f...I like the floaty feel/language to this - light, flows well, good spacing/line breaks.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-67931506936194881252010-11-09T19:55:05.020-08:002010-11-09T19:55:05.020-08:00i especially like the wordplay of the first two st...i especially like the wordplay of the first two stanzas, yet how you keep it from going overboard. Great description also in those stanzas.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396283465512523834.post-89250536501699128112010-11-09T15:17:31.622-08:002010-11-09T15:17:31.622-08:00oh snap...that took quite a turn in those closing ...oh snap...that took quite a turn in those closing lines...leaving me a bit chilled. nice one shot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com